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七律◆冰心梅骨

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自古英雄多哲圣
而今处处有奸伶
梅花傲骨寒霜挺
一任娇芳讥笑评
看到仁兄佳作，联想到陆游、毛泽东。同是写梅，心情不同、感受不同，词意自然不同。借贵地涂鸦一首，无怪。红心送上

纵观二位之才，虽不及古人，于我辈中，亦是超群了，观二位之诗，颇有愤世之意，咏梅乃是咏己，我也献丑一做
莫问梅花何处踪，须知苦寒香自来。
只写前面两句，因为实在难想出与前两句映衬之作了，抱歉

"千秋寄慨来时路，一片红梅沥血开。"很喜欢这句  真切 生动  献上红心

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自古英雄不问出身，即成英雄，自然称得上哲圣二字。

南山

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南山。

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有道是   霜惨寒梅塑傲魁
            冰雪红辉耀天归
            剑锋弑月赢敌溃
            风带暗香杀气挥   


祝贺虎兄升官  恭喜恭喜

骄阳恋雪，半露明眸看寒窗，红梅映月，半卷霓裳守空房，呵呵，看到雪梅，我到没想到别人，单单想到了红楼之事，老版红楼对我印象太深，宝黛2人都对雪梅寄予情怀，欣然中带着无可奈何的苦涩，但作者的文章中却带着一丝奔放，看雪梅似偶遇，却没了踏雪寻梅的感慨，自我感觉作者似乎对雪梅有点刻意，我家在北方，我感觉雪梅很清新，不管是高兴与不高兴，当你看见雪梅的情景时，感觉不是欢喜，不是悲伤，像是听见了某种音乐，心里很平静，似乎有点忘我，就像忘记世事一样，没心思去想别的，所以我自己觉得雪梅不紧紧是铿锵，更多的是悠然

刚柔相济，一直是您的典型风格。有侠骨，也有柔情，这样的诗歌读起来最让人心醉。

还记得您说，清照有才情，淑真有情才。虽然只把两个字调换了一下，却形象的说明了两人的差别。这首诗中用到了“痴才”这个词，一定是您自己，呵呵

祝贺您成为诗韵版主

红心:coffe

呵呵

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英雄何叹无知己，从来孤松傲寒风
献丑，方家勿笑

我只是来给虎兄增添人气的，就不献丑了。感觉诗里行间霸气淋漓，震得不敢说话，那…只有送红心啦。

呵呵。谢谢色火。

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虎兄，这是儒是法也得看场合。你想啊，后妈教孩子，你是想她外表凶点回家好好疼呢？还是在外面装疼爱，回家死里收拾好呢？嘿嘿…扯远了，我想说的是，不管什么形式的展现吧，只要显示出自己风格就好，爱什么就该用自己的方式去爱，不管写诗还是做人。

还得谢谢那个复制回复的兄弟啊，这才让在下领略到虎大的诗词功夫，真是没的说多看看高人们的作品对自身真是裨益良多，以后写东西也有所借鉴了，天下文章一大抄嘛

梅花越冷越开花，应该被选为中国的国花。象征中国人民的苦难和不幸，体会作为中国人的傲骨和自豪。

颈联生生断裂，且无诗意可言。尾联收的也挺俗气，没什么新意。